The Queen of Balthazar – 11/28/10

2175 words.

Scene 1:  The Governor orders all of the Imperial warships out to protect the convoy that’s under attack but the Admiral insists on leaving a couple of destroyers.

Scene 2:  The Bodyguard goes to a meeting with a couple of other guerilla leaders to plan an attack to steal a bunch of weapons when the door explodes as the Imperials attack.

Scene 3:  The Governor gets notification that a rebel fleet has jumped into space and is coming in to attack and he’s able to call back the Admiral and his battle group for defense.

Scene 4:  The Princess’ Lieutenant is with the attack fleet and gets the scan of the system and realizes that the Admiral and his ships haven’t left yet and that they started their attack too soon.

And with that, I’m a WINNER!  I’ve got 50007 words.  And my football team won!  What a glorious day!  Yeah, baby, that’s what I’m talking about!


2 Responses to “The Queen of Balthazar – 11/28/10”

  1. Congrats! Well done! While you are on a roll, keep going. I want to follow the rest of the story as you rewrite it. 🙂

  2. Confetti! Standing O! Great job, TPN, and you did it against some painful obstacles. Yeehaw!

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