The Queen of Balthazar – 11/23/10

1459 words. 1 scene and 1 partial scene.

Scene 1:  The Captain contacts the Imperials and talks to the Colonel and kinda works out a deal for him to open a door and let the Imperials in.  He goes out to talk to the other prisoners, and they’re all gone.  He searches the prison, but he’s all alone.  And the ways out are boobytrapped.  The Captain goes back to his cell to wait for the Imperials.

Scene 2: After not hearing back from the prisoners, the Governor and the Colonel prepare to storm the prison.

Long, hard day at work.  I’m tired.  I only had about an hour to write and my brain is frazzled.  I was supposed to be off tomorrow and Friday and now, I may have to work.  I had planned on getting a ton of writing done (and finishing Nano, I’m only a little over 8,000 words away.)


One Response to “The Queen of Balthazar – 11/23/10”

  1. You do a wonderful job of turning a path into a labyrinth. :)TX

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