The Queen of Balthazar – 11/19/10

1656 words.  2.5 scenes.

One inmate saves some other inmates when the fighting breaks out.  The Bodyguard walks into the central control room and captures the commandant after some gunfire and they talk about surrender.  The Bodyguard frees the Sarge who’s in the torture room and they figure out which guard was the interrogator who tortured them.

I’ve got another couple of scenes with the Bodyguard in the lead before I get back to the Princess and her mission to come save him.


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