WABWM – 3/24/10

552 Words.

The captain of the Tireless searched through the wreckage of the prison ship with a knot in the pit of his stomach that he had killed The Princess.  They are looking for life and finding nothing.  But then his sensor officer notices something.  There are no bodies.  Nothing that looks like a body.  And the captain laughs and comments that the Princess is just like her old man.

WRITING:  I’m starting to get more and more into the groove on this.  The words are coming out easier.  I just need to devote more time to writing.  Also, I rewrote the end of the stuff I wrote last night so that the Usurper is going to have a press conference about how the Princess is dead even though the Admiral he’s talking to tries to tell him that they’re still searching the wreckage.  This fixes the problems I had last night with the timing issues.

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2 Responses to “WABWM – 3/24/10”

  1. thepencilneck Says:

    And I forgot to add. I’m going to have this incident cause the captain of this ship to re-think his allegiance.

  2. Glad to see you bounced back into the story. 🙂

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